it was a novel which was easy to predict but again highlighted the simple things one should be careful about
Most importantly it circled back to the saying there is no such thing as free lunch in the world Naomi would have understood that for sure
a) Eva being ungrateful and irresponsible was definitely a lesson and one should be not erratic with behaviour
b) Naomi should have not followed the glitter when she got mixed with jules after all friend to all is a friend to none
c) Helen should have never given a second chance if one has been aways its for good always
d) Dean the overall charming one , well dont they say somethings are too good to be true
e) about Chillie i guess nature never changes no matter what the world wants to believe
Overall a good read
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